Латентный адекват.
Sad Novel
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Last time you were here I was far from you
All that I need to do – haven’t be done
I want to go away, but I need to breakthrough
You are the one for me, only one.
Ch
I wanna talk to you, but I can't speak
I wanna cry sometimes, but I have no tears
I can't stand my life without your eyes
If I'll be here, you'll have no more fears.
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My life like a book that opened in middle
But it's a sad novel – only strong pain
I want to say "I love you, my little"
I'll die if I don't see your nice face again.
3
Only you can save this book from fire
Do it, please, you'll be in my defence
You are my love, my soul and my desire
I don't forget if you give me last chance.
Last time you were here I was far from you
All that I need to do – haven’t be done
I want to go away, but I need to breakthrough
You are the one for me, only one.
Ch
I wanna talk to you, but I can't speak
I wanna cry sometimes, but I have no tears
I can't stand my life without your eyes
If I'll be here, you'll have no more fears.
2
My life like a book that opened in middle
But it's a sad novel – only strong pain
I want to say "I love you, my little"
I'll die if I don't see your nice face again.
3
Only you can save this book from fire
Do it, please, you'll be in my defence
You are my love, my soul and my desire
I don't forget if you give me last chance.
[S]artex 18.05.07.
Попсовенько вышло, обыденно, да и в орфографии не совсем уверен...
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11.08.2007 в 17:34-
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12.08.2007 в 06:00Спасибо!
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17.08.2007 в 16:24Спасибо не звенит и не булькает))
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01.09.2007 в 11:48Орфографию помочь исправить? (хотя чего я умничаю...)
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01.09.2007 в 13:32Спасибо, но мне Воланд уже подсказал, просто я здесь решил оставить первоначальный вариант!
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12.06.2008 в 04:04